…and then I found five dollars!

*Edited to use original source with artist’s credit

  • huquad@lemmy.ml
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    1 day ago

    I think the best way to tell the story is by starting at the end, briefly, then going back to the beginning, and then periodically returning to the end, maybe giving different characters’ perspectives throughout. Just to give it a bit of dynamism, otherwise it’s just sort of a linear story.