Few weeks ago I wrote about a side project that I’m using to learn, this is my reviewing what I missed on the project, the main issues after a few dozen games in the platform with friends. And what I learned in the process.

All comments, feedback is appreciated.

  • lad@programming.dev
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    9 days ago

    To be honest, I didn’t read through, because of all the flourishing and humourous wordy descriptions.

    It feels unbalanced and leaning towards comedy, but jokes were not supposed to become the only reason to read that, were they?

    • Shin@piefed.socialOP
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      9 days ago

      Fair point, but a more “unhinged” text also don’t bring the discussion that I want to have in the piefed/lemmy… so I need to choose for the boring, unhinged or comedic text.

      My natural words goes harder on the acid and sarcastic wording, if I tone down I can get on the “comedic” flair, which in my humble view, is sightly pleasant to read.

      But if the few words were enough for us to get here and start the conversation, the text already proved its worth.