Seems pretty unobjectionable to me. I certainly won’t actually implement all of the changes suggested here, but there’s none where I can’t see the logic. What things about it bother you specifically?
Some of them are understandable and offer solid suggestions, others are vague in their suggestions or offer up alternatives that would just be confusing to a reader.
Seems pretty unobjectionable to me. I certainly won’t actually implement all of the changes suggested here, but there’s none where I can’t see the logic. What things about it bother you specifically?
Some of them are understandable and offer solid suggestions, others are vague in their suggestions or offer up alternatives that would just be confusing to a reader.